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Old July 11 2009, 06:13 PM   #6
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Re: July Challenge Entry--A Stone's Throw Away

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It is difficult to describe a story so sad as "wonderful" because that seems to be too happy a word. You had me in tears. But it is also a happy story, so maybe wonderful is the right word.

The way you piece the two together, his memories and his current situation was very well crafted - leading us to the memory distant from this pain, of his childhood and his father how his father would want to be remembered.

But then I'm a real sap when it comes to stories of parents and children
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