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Old June 29 2009, 03:54 PM   #2
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Re: Tale of Temporal Gifting: Part 3 [June '09 Challenge]

Hmm.

This is more like a fragment than a completed story. But it's an interesting fragment, which leaves you wanting to know who these people are, and how the Federation came to be displaced by the Commonwealth.
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