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Old June 11 2009, 01:28 PM   #48
The Badger
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Re: Starship Enterprise "Broken Bow" (Alternate version)

Admiral2 wrote: View Post
Procedural nitpick: Mayweather shouldn't be giving orders - or requests - to anyone on the bridge if the captain's there unless he has explicit authorization to do so, meaning the captain has to say something like "Helmsman has the conn." Otherwise he's overstepping his bounds.

Other than that, a bonny installment! Good on ye!

Oh, and another suggestion for Prof. Partridge! Fergie:
Thanks for the advice, I've made a couple of slight changes to the dialogue to reflect that. To be honest though I'll probably be making that mistake again. Mind you, Trek itself rarely got procedure right, so at least I'm in good company!

Fergie as Polly Partridge? Intriguing suggestion. Can she do a British accent?

Praetor wrote: View Post
It would also appear that Mayweather is behaving himself now...
Yes, Mr Mayweather does indeed seem to be behaving himself. I wonder why...
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