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Old June 10 2009, 08:32 PM   #45
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Re: Starship Enterprise "Broken Bow" (Alternate version)

Very well done. I like the apology on the intercom-it sounded very "Archer" and that last bit about his dad got me. Caught me totally by surprise. It was a very nice touch.
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