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Old June 5 2009, 01:35 PM   #318
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Re: Star Trek: Sigils and Unions--The Thirteenth Order

Very well done! To me, the strongest element of your story telling is how you are making these alien cultures--Cardassians, Jem'Hadar, Vortas, etc. well...alien. These are not "humans in rubber suits"--you've created three dimensional alien characters with their own thought processes, cultures, and goals--no mean feat.
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