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Old May 31 2009, 08:58 PM   #5
CeJay
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Re: An Unexpected Encounter (May '09 Challenge)

I agree. This was perhaps a little bit too short and McCoy would come across as a complete jerk if he's saying those things within Chapel's earshot.

Otherwise I liked the character interactions here.
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