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CeJay · May 31 2009, 08:58 PM

I agree. This was perhaps a little bit too short and McCoy would come across as a complete jerk if he's saying those things within Chapel's earshot.

Otherwise I liked the character interactions here.

May 31 2009, 08:58 PM	#5
CeJay Commodore	Re: An Unexpected Encounter (May '09 Challenge) I agree. This was perhaps a little bit too short and McCoy would come across as a complete jerk if he's saying those things within Chapel's earshot. Otherwise I liked the character interactions here. __________________ StarEagleAdventures.com is back with a full site containing downloadable e-books for your preferred e-reader. Proud Member of United Trek