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Old May 31 2009, 11:55 AM   #24
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Re: May Challenge Entry: Point of Divergence

A very compelling and powerful story. You used the second-person-perspective very well. I also like the multiple endings. (I chose future #1 first , but I read the other one, too.)
I found both futures to be plausible. Once you have a charismatic leader with simple answers while the other side has not, all sorts of terrible acts might happen.

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