I did a little playing around with this as an exercise some years ago
, and used a warp drive bit from TVH and a replaced photon torpedo, just to see what that would do, and I think seeing the ship whoosh off away from the camera has more punch.
As to the work listed, he is being a tad slavish in a few shots, like the approach to the Enterprise before "Plan B", which repeats compositional errors in the shuttle's approach angle that don't make sense.
The whole thing (as released) is bad.
In my opinion, the only shot needing to be kept is the one of the shuttle hitting the outside rim of the Enterprise shuttle bay. I'd completely re-choreograph and re-vis the whole thing -- including the graphics on the BoP bridge...