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Old April 8 2009, 02:02 AM   #117
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Re: Excelsior Technical Manual - Revived!

Praetor, why don't you tie the Ent-B variant and the warp turbulence issue together? maybe the design changes on the B were an attempt to resolve the issue that ultimately either did not work or only partially worked making it not cost effective.

Chapter 9, paragraph 5,
"for a threat that, before that encounter"
Would read better if the second "that" was replaced with "this"

Chapter 9, paragraph 2,
"sufficient parts spares"
change to
"sufficient spare parts"
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