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Old March 29 2009, 09:53 PM   #65
kitsune
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Re: Excelsior Technical Manual - Revived!

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None of them managed to propel the ship into infinite velocity.
intoto

At infinite velocity, how would the navigational deflector and sensors work? They would have to be infinitely fast as well.

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( Indeed, this was another separate problem
You have an extra space after the parenthesis.

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standard description for his unbreakable inifinite velocity limit.
unbreakableunreachable

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another part of Starfleet Command, saw this plan
remove the comma

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completing her fitting out
fitting-out (or outfitting)

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The work to build a new warp drive large enough to accommodate such a big ship and then install it into an already completed ship was staggering.
was staggeringrequired a great deal of ingenuity

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Fortunately for Excelsior, they didn’t.
they didn'tnone did (because they implies the Starfleet brass, but you mean no problems arose)

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drive on this scale was almost unprecedented
remove almost. Either it was unprecedented, or it was not.

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made revolutionary discoveries
discoveriestechnological breakthroughs (or innovations)
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