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Old March 28 2009, 09:53 PM   #62
kitsune
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Re: Excelsior Technical Manual - Revived!

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Finally Starfleet had enough.
had had enough. (need two had's here)

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As quickly as they had sang
had sung

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The name 'Eugene's Limit' would come to be the standard description for his unbreakable inifinite velocity barrier.
It's not really a barrier if there's nothing on the other side of it.

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Excelsior also received a new, state of the art bridge module
state-of-the-art

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First, she retained the awkward sublight maneuverability even at full impulse that had plagued her earlier trials.
...which had plagued...

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and ordered the next three to follow tentative on the first three's performance.
replace tentative with contingent

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4000th post. Congratulate me, I'm a Rear Admiral now.
Wow, you're prolific!
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