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Old March 27 2009, 09:35 PM   #6
CeJay
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Re: Star Trek: Voyager - Dark Realm

I liked the lower decks perspective here as well. I usually don't read fanfic based on an established Trek incarnation but this did have the feel like a real Voyager story.

As for your style, I like dialog, especially when it flows well. It gives your story a great, fast pace.

But yeah, some more description could help give your characters a bit more depth.
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