Rather like this fic, either direction you decide to go. I'll keep reading if you keep writing.
BTW I'm gonna post one of my own works up here one of these days, it's a Voyager crossover fic (with about seven or so other universes) that I'm working on...
Keep writing, fellow Trek fanfiction writer and creator of original characters. It's writers of your ilk that show the fanfiction scene that not all Trek Original Characters are Mary Sue/Gary Stu types.
Speaking of which, would you mind giving me your opinion on an O/C I've created for one of my fics.