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Old January 28 2009, 06:52 PM   #3
RobertScorpio
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Re: The Plebe - A Gibraltar short story

CeJay wrote: View Post
Short but definitely sweet.

It kinda creates more questions about Ramirez than it tries to answer. Why couldn't she go back, ever? Perhaps we'll find out in Gravity.

Nicely done.
I really like the way you were able to describe the visuals of what she was seeing...the pounding sleet, the billowing grey clouds, ect...it really made you "see" this person in a real, 3-D, world...great job!!!

Rob
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