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Old January 9 2009, 08:29 PM   #10
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Re: Star Trek: Lambda Paz

I'm caught up-its been a good read. I like the way you mixed your characters in amongst canon characters and episodes. You might want to edit a little heavier-you had a few sentences that looked like mash-ups of 2 or more.
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