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Old December 2 2008, 09:38 PM   #140
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Re: Star Trek: Sigils and Unions--The Thirteenth Order

Excellent, tense scene. Your characters are solidifying into individuals(despite the large number of them) and their interplay is(damn, TLR used the word I wanted!) well, it holds a reader in place and focused.
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