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Old November 11 2008, 04:25 PM   #37
DavidFalkayn
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Re: Arc of the Wolf: On the Nature of Wind - Part II, Chapter 4

Just finished catching up with this terrific story. I'm a sucker for TOS-era stories--especially those that take place prior to the start of the series. This is an incredibly rich story. Beautiful scenery painting--a detail all too often left out of fan fiction writing, strong characterizations--I agonized along with Scotty and the others as Corrigan began slipping into depression and now I'm hopeful as it appears he's beginning to come out of it--but as a changed man--for better or worse, only time will tell. You've also done an exquisite job in filling out Scotty's back history.

And did I mention how I enjoyed your renditions of Belfast? There were several instances where I almost felt as if I was there.

Very welll done!
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