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Re: Challenge Entry - A Time of Terror
captcalhoun wrote:
when Livingstone disappears. literally mid sentence when the woman whips out her tricorder.
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Thanks, I see it now.
It would have been difficult to uphold for the rest of the story, but the present tense really suits the pace and confusion in those two paragraphs.
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Space is disease and danger wrapped in darkness and silence - Dr. McCoy
And he says that like it's a bad thing...
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