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Old October 31 2008, 11:10 PM   #5
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Re: Challenge Entry - A Time of Terror

captcalhoun wrote: View Post
when Livingstone disappears. literally mid sentence when the woman whips out her tricorder.
Thanks, I see it now.

It would have been difficult to uphold for the rest of the story, but the present tense really suits the pace and confusion in those two paragraphs.
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