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Old October 31 2008, 10:10 PM   #5
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Re: Challenge Entry - A Time of Terror

captcalhoun wrote: View Post
when Livingstone disappears. literally mid sentence when the woman whips out her tricorder.
Thanks, I see it now.

It would have been difficult to uphold for the rest of the story, but the present tense really suits the pace and confusion in those two paragraphs.
Space is disease and danger wrapped in darkness and silence - Dr. McCoy

And he says that like it's a bad thing...
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