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Old October 31 2008, 10:15 PM   #2
captcalhoun
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Re: Challenge Entry - A Time of Terror

you switched from past to present tense in there. y'might wanna fix that...

you also persistently misspelled forcefield as well as some other spelling mistakes (malevolent for one)
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