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Challenge Entry - A Time of Terror
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October 31 2008, 10:15 PM
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Re: Challenge Entry - A Time of Terror
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you switched from past to present tense in there. y'might wanna fix that...
you also persistently misspelled forcefield as well as some other spelling mistakes (malevolent for one)
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