Nerys Dukat wrote:
2375—The Dominion War—Aftermath of the attack on Rondac III
Wow. Several stunning chapters. Macet becomes more and more likable; I think I'll have a very hard time forgiving you if it turns out that he's anything like Dukat in the end. Or on that level of bad. I really love how evocative your language is -- you pull out these very primal concepts of loyalty and freedom and what kind of person it takes to leads a small group into battle against an overwhelming force.
This last chapter I've read so far took my breath away. Beautiful work.