Sorry if the little letters are a bit hard to read. The red spots are about the position of the people in picture 1 and 2.
The green is what we can see in each pic. Anything not in green is total guess-work. Still, I'm getting a bit better of a feel for it.
I like this one more too. I think the rail in the back is solid and not broken up, though. I also wouldn't put it past JJ to have only 1 turbolift going to the bridge.