Hey - I've just caught up with the fan fiction and it's very well done. I do like how the realism of sleeping with the enemy - especially if one is Bajoran - is addressed. The bit about the language is quite appealing. I never thought Cardassian was a different language - it all was in English when I watched the series.
I did notice this;
Nonetheless, he allowed Macet to take the lead, for they had yet to be officially released—not to mention professional courtesy between militaries: the gul did outrank him.[/FONT]
[FONT=Corbel] Trughal leveled a vicious glare at Folani with her accusation. “This Bajoran insists on demonstrating contempt for us and our generosity—”
Just a slight error to a most excellent installment.