I am struck by the vivid imagery of your words. A very poignant chapter about a ship's commander brooding over his wounded ship and lost crew mates - very well done!
I'll second that. A very well-crafted passage.
Thanks for reading!
I owe a lot to KRAD for what he hinted at in Demons of Air and Darkness
, of course: things clearly didn't go easily for those Cardassians who chose to rebel.
Such rebellion doesn't come without a price, and I thought it would be good to really show what that was like for those who were in the middle of it.