Macet's leadership has produced incredible loyalty from his crew - a testament to his character and conduct. Now that leadership is put to the test as he takes his ship into battle - a dangerous strike against the Dominion cloning facility on Rondac III.
Again, I am impressed by your writing - marvelous character work and subtle visualization. I find myself quickly immersed in your story and saddened when a segment comes to an end. Great work!
I'm very glad you feel the visualization is working for you. As I've said before, that's always been one of my weak points to my own estimation, so I'm glad it works.
Macet's definitely an excellent gul--but I think he's also got a very strong crew standing by him. I like that saying, "Surround yourself with great people." I think that's also what he's done.
Redshirt beat me to the punch. Anything else is redundant.
Thanks for reading!