Nice translation so far, Bill...
I take it you were never any more taken by the "Enclopedia" design for the Valiant than I was, huh?
Obviously, this is an Albuqu... damn, I can never spell that guy's name!... well, a "Warp Ring" design, huh?
My only quibble so far is that I can't judge scale at all. I presume you're going to have something to indicate the scale of the ship (and not just the "little blue guy")?