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Old August 22 2008, 11:10 AM   #16
DavidFalkayn
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Re: Star Trek: Sigils and Unions--The Thirteenth Order

Very well done character segment. I also like how you've maintained the suspicion towards Gul Macet on Spirodobpoulos's part--after all, there is a war going on, why should Spiro trust Macet? You're doing a good job as regards pacing and maintaining the tension level.
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