I have a question about the story though: In Starscape
's last frame I thought the forcefield (or whatever it is
) was emitted by Kirk
(and not the woman). Wasn't she trying to shoot Kirk with her weapon? I understood that Kirk used a forcefield of some kind (maybe with his servo) to keep the woman from killing him. Did I get that totally wrong? Also, in Venardhi
's panel I got the impression The Origin
was someone or something else than Kirk.
Ah. Yes. Erm.
I've changed the dialogue a bit.
I didn't mean to say that you shoud change anything. I just thought I was misinterpreting things. Hope you didn't take it the wrong way.
Having said that, I certainly like the new version better.
Actually, that was the orginal version
. Pretty much anyway.
I changed my mind.
Oh, and to those of you wondering. I'm not suggesting we use the Gatchaman/Battle of the Planets characters. In fact, I suggest against it.
I merely nicked the ship design