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Old August 18 2008, 09:57 AM   #184
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Re: An Idea For A Game/Project

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I have a question about the story though: In Starscape's last frame I thought the forcefield (or whatever it is ) was emitted by Kirk (and not the woman). Wasn't she trying to shoot Kirk with her weapon? I understood that Kirk used a forcefield of some kind (maybe with his servo) to keep the woman from killing him. Did I get that totally wrong? Also, in Venardhi's panel I got the impression The Origin was someone or something else than Kirk.
Ah. Yes. Erm.

I've changed the dialogue a bit.
I didn't mean to say that you shoud change anything. I just thought I was misinterpreting things. Hope you didn't take it the wrong way.

Having said that, I certainly like the new version better.
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