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Old July 20 2008, 12:42 AM   #23
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Re: Greater Than The Sum Review *** POTENTIAL SPOILERS ***

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You should see some of the puns I wanted to use but didn't. (Worf gives T'Ryssa a speech about how he's grown and matured, and she replies, "Good to know you're not a static Klingon.")
I'd like to take this opportunity to say a huge public THANK YOU to Margaret Clark for preventing that groaner from getting into print.
Actually Margaret never saw that one. I ended up having Worf give that speech to Kadohata, so it would've been redundant to have him give it to Trys. But there were a number of wisecracks that I did trim out in the second draft when Margaret thought I'd taken the character a little too far.
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