Re: Star Ship Polaris
My one problem is that it is very flat. . . I couldn't say what to change off hand, but it doesn't feel like a 'hero' ship.
"There is no reason why good cannot triumph as often as evil. The triumph of anything is a matter of organization. If there are such things as angels, I hope that they are organized along the lines of the Maffia." - Winston Niles Rumfoord.