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Old February 1 2008, 03:27 AM   #10
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Re: Star Trek: Full Speed Ahead

A great start! Your writing style is strong and fluid, and your scenes take on a life of their own. That was a great way to pull the readers into the story by giving a glimpse of the peril that awaits the ship.

It appears strange things are afoot aboard the good ship Farragut, and our faux-engineer friends are likely involved.

More please!
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