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USS Fardell September 27 2007 09:40 AM

Non Trek Fic - Doctor Who - The Many Doctors
 
Doctor Who – The Many Doctors
Disclaimer: Doctor Who belongs to the British Broadcasting Corporation (BBC), the Doctor belongs to the BBC, the TARDIS belongs to the BBC, The Terileptil also belongs to the BBC. Anything else is my idea, and belongs to me, if you want to use it, you will have to ask, I’ll probably give permission.

Prologue
The Thirteenth Doctor’s TARDIS, in the Vortex

Felicia Lovell entered the console room, where the Doctor and his other companions were, observing the TARDIS’s progress through the vortex, the TARDIS had been going off course as of late, for the last (‘month? 2 months 3 months? One could never quite tell in the TARDIS’ Felicia thought), it hasn’t been going where the Doctor wanted it to go. Felicia had washed following their last adventure, in which a Terileptil had attempted to interfere with history in Ancient Rome.

“Ah, there you are” the Doctor said, as she entered.

“Are we off course again?” Felicia asked.

“Of course we are, it seems the console destination input circuitry, has joined the chameleon circuit in being broken” one of her fellow companions, Daniel Hadley, said.

“That is not the reason we are going off course” the Doctor said, with a disapproving tone.

“Do you know what the reason is then?” Sigrun Friorikadottir asked.

“The reason is that the TARDIS is going off course, is that it wants to go off course, remember that the TARDIS is alive, so to speak” the Doctor said.

“But why would the TARDIS want to go off course, and why did it take a few months for you to determine that?” Sabrina Davis asked.

“It didn’t take me months to find out that the TARDIS was going off course because it wanted to go off course, I found out almost immediately” the Doctor said.

The companions thought for a moment, they knew that the Doctor did have a connection to the TARDIS.

“So, where are we going now?” Sigrun asked.

“If the TARDIS is going off course, we won’t know until we land, won’t we Doctor?” Daniel said, half to Sigrun, and half to the Doctor.

“The coordinates I input were for somewhere in Britain in early 2034, however we have already gone off course, and are no longer aiming for Britain, but for Ireland, and may be arriving earlier, around 2021. Not much of a course deviation compared to earlier ones” the Doctor said.

Then they watched the console, were not that much surprised when the TARDIS materialised in the Azores, sometime in 2018.

To be continued...

Thoughts?

doctorwho 03 September 28 2007 04:17 AM

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Interesting beginning. Sounds like a story many Whovians would love to read. :bolian:

Starkers September 28 2007 09:33 AM

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Hard to have any thoughts at the moment, certainly not until we know more about this 13th Doctor, and his companions. Presently all we know are their names :p

Have you based your 13th Doctor on anyone in particular?

doctorwho 03 September 29 2007 04:52 AM

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If you follow continuity, this 13th Doctor could be based on Micheal Jayston, who played the Valyard in 'The Trial of a Timelord'.

RevdKathy September 29 2007 07:47 AM

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He was Rochester once to Sorcha Cussack's Jane Eyre. And he was Quiller. He's on my 'yummy' list.

Starkers September 29 2007 10:15 AM

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doctorwho 03 said:
If you follow continuity, this 13th Doctor could be based on Micheal Jayston, who played the Valyard in 'The Trial of a Timelord'.

I thought the Valyard was somewhere between the 11th and 12th regenerations, not the 13th doctor himself, more the twelth and a half :)

Gibraltar September 29 2007 10:55 PM

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A promising beginning. :) More, please.

doctorwho 03 September 30 2007 04:25 AM

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Starkers said:
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doctorwho 03 said:
If you follow continuity, this 13th Doctor could be based on Micheal Jayston, who played the Valyard in 'The Trial of a Timelord'.

I thought the Valyard was somewhere between the 11th and 12th regenerations, not the 13th doctor himself, more the twelth and a half :)

It's never really explained what the Valyard is. From what I've found over the years, some believe he is the 13th Doctor, others think he's some kind of Watcher created by the High Council to take down the Doctor at his trial.

USS Fardell October 11 2007 01:17 PM

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Starkers said:
Hard to have any thoughts at the moment, certainly not until we know more about this 13th Doctor, and his companions. Presently all we know are their names :p

Have you based your 13th Doctor on anyone in particular?

The next part will have more information on the Doctor and his companions.

As for who the Doctor is based on, the thought of an older Daniel Radcliff has passed my mind.

USS Fardell October 11 2007 01:22 PM

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doctorwho 03 said:
If you follow continuity, this 13th Doctor could be based on Micheal Jayston, who played the Valyard in 'The Trial of a Timelord'.

As others have said, the Valyard is between the 12th and 13th Doctors, so not Michael Jayston.

USS Fardell October 11 2007 01:33 PM

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Doctor Who – The Many Doctors
Disclaimer: Doctor Who belongs to the British Broadcasting Corporation (BBC), the Doctor belongs to the BBC, the TARDIS belongs to the BBC, the Azores belong to Portugal, Anything else is my idea, and belongs to me (apart from a twist at the end which will get a separate disclaimer), if you want to use it, you will have to ask, I’ll probably give permission.

Chapter 1 - Azores
29 September 2018, The Azores Autonomous Region, Portugal, just outside the city of Ponta Delaga

The TARDIS had materialised in a forest. Sabrina emerged from the TARDIS first. Though she came from an era when world travel was commonplace (but not as commonplace as later) she had never been to the Azores. She breathed in the air, she smelled hardly any pollution. “It is peaceful” she said.

“You know that can change very quickly Sabie” the Doctor said, as he followed her out of the TARDIS. ‘Sabie’ felt a flush of embarrassment; she didn’t much like the Doctor calling her by that diminutive.

“Not that likely that aliens would start invading the Earth here or many experiments that would go wrong” Sabrina said.

“But, these things are unexpected” the Doctor said, knowing that Sabie would continue to argue the point…


Daniel exited the ‘timeship’, as he called it, to see Sabrina and the Doctor arguing, again!

They were arguing about whether they would find events/actions that the Doctor would have to be involved in, to right the wrongs. “Why do you always have to argue with each other?” he asked.

“We are not arguing” Sabrina said, with a blush.


“Maybe we were, Dan, but things can change very quickly, as you know” the Doctor said. Daniel agreed with that, at most of the places he had been since he had joined the Doctor in his travels a few years ago (relatively speaking), things had changed very quickly. Peacefulness and then, an invasion or an experiment gone wrong, or even an old enemy of the Doctor trying to take advantage of the situation to get back at the Doctor.

“I agree with that” Daniel said.


Sigrun exited the TARDIS next, after having changed into clothing appropriate for the era, it being prior to her time of origin she knew what the fashions were. She saw however that the Doctor, Sabrina and Daniel were not dressed for the period, looking as anachronistic as the TARDIS’s police box exterior, the Doctor dressed as he always did, in clothes from the same period as the TARDIS disguise. Sabrina was dressed in clothes from her native period approximately a decade prior to the current time, including a t-shirt with a catchphrase from one of her favourite science fiction television shows. Daniel’s mode of dress being somewhere between the two.

“Ah, Sigrid, there you are, we were just discussing the possibility of something happening” the Doctor said.

Sigrun flinched, though not much, she didn’t like the Doctor calling her a different name, though she knew that he did it out of affection, like with the other companions.

“It is most likely that something will certainly happen” she said.

“Told you, she usually agrees with me” Sabrina said, with a cheer in her voice.

“For certain” Daniel said as an afterthought. Sigrun walked over to them, and waited with them for the others.


Jia’hale re-entered the console room, with agitation. Again with Earth! The TARDIS hadn’t been to her home planet since before it began going off course! She hoped that situation would change soon. She had just been to the wardrobe, and had been pleased to remove the toga she had to wear in Rome, she would have had been happy to leave the TARDIS with nothing, however the Doctor had said that the majority of places most certainly didn’t like that sort of behaviour.

Sigrun had also had said that the Azores in 2018 were relatively conservative for the period. So she had dressed similarly to Sigrun and then left the wardrobe. As she entered the console room she saw Felicia wandering around the console in thought. She didn’t notice that she had entered. ‘Ok, I’ll just hop outside and wait for her with the others’ she thought, as she approached the outer door.


“There you are Jia” the Doctor said, as he saw his companion from Tossekia IV exit the TARDIS.

“So what are we going to do? Look for trouble?” she asked.

“Possibly” the Doctor said.

“Absolutely, that is what the Doctor does usually” Daniel said.

“Most likely” Sabrina said.


“We are going to find trouble then?” Jia’hale asked, knowing that the Azores probably won’t be peaceful for much longer. The Doctor then had a thoughtful look on his face; she knew that she had spoken right.


“Where is Felicia?” Sabrina asked a minute later, wondering whether she had wandered off without them, and possibly requiring rescue…

“She is still in the TARDIS, she was wandering around the console room in a thoughtful mood, when I passed through it” Jia’hale said.

“Ok, we will wait a little longer, then I’ll go back and ask if she wants to come, It wouldn’t be the first time someone stayed behind” the Doctor said. So they waited a while longer.


Felicia was in thought, it seemed the TARDIS wanted to communicate with her, in some way, at a level which was different from the usual, different from when the TARDIS translated languages (she would know, with Sigrun and Jia’hale speaking different Earth languages, some or most of the time, and the Doctor sometimes speaking Gallifreyan, or whatever the language spoken by the Time Lords would be called), she sensed that the TARDIS was disturbed about something.

She saw Jia’hale pass through the console room, exiting the TARDIS. Felicia continued to think for a few more minutes; all she was sure of was that the TARDIS was disturbed. She left then left the ship, making sure to close the Police Box doors, behind her.


The Doctor was about to go back into the TARDIS when Felicia came out. He sensed her state of mind immediately and knew that the TARDIS had imparted (or had tried to impart) something to her. That was something that hadn’t happened for a while, probably not more than once since the Time War. He looked at the other companions; he saw that all of them, more or less, knew that something was up with Felicia.

“Ok, don’t be all staring at me like that, lets go and see if anything is going to happen here, in the Azores” she said.

“Something is up” Daniel said to himself.


Felicia felt uneasy, feeling like going back to the TARDIS, but decided that everyone, probably would need her help.


The Doctor decided to try to talk to Felicia privately after they were underway into Ponta Delaga. “Let’s go, we can solve this mystery later” he said. The others all agreed. The Doctor then used his sonic screwdriver to determine the direction of the city, and they went off in that direction.


“Elisa, what do you think the TARDIS was trying to put to you?” the Doctor asked.

Felicia wasn’t put off by the Doctor’s nickname for her; she was used to it by now.

“I think, that the TARDIS is disturbed about something, but that is all I think I can say about it, anything else would be private” she said.

“Ok, agreed” the Doctor said, he knew he probably get much more out of her. She had to process the ‘information’ in her mind.


Soon the TARDIS crew arrived at the city. They found that there were people running around in panic, something was going on.

“Ok, something is happening, but what, is it an invasion?” Sabrina asked.

“Not sure” Felicia said.


A ship landed nearby, and figures emerged from it.


The Doctor told his companions to run. They ran to a nearby park and hid behind some trees before the figures in the ship could see them.

“What are they Doctor?” Felicia asked, wondering whether this was what the TARDIS was disturbed about, the moment she thought that thought, though she knew that it wasn’t what the TARDIS was disturbed about.


“Drahvins! But how would they have gained time travel without my knowing?” the Doctor asked.

“They look all female, Doctor” Daniel said.

“Don’t let that fool you, Dan, they are ruthless, they keep only a small population of males for reproductive purposes, they kill the rest, and their foot soldiers are cultivated in test tubes for one purpose, to kill!” the Doctor said.

“You make them sound similar to the Daleks, Doctor” Jai’hale said.

“No, they don’t kill everything, they just conquer, and they have a large empire in Galaxy 4, in the 6th Millenium.

Daniel looked at the Drahvins; they all looked alike, with blonde hair, considering that they would be beautiful if they had any warmth in their faces. They wore green and white uniforms and were carrying huge energy guns.

Felicia looked at the Drahvins, she was suddenly very afraid…

Jia’hale looked at the Drahvins. She was glad that they were different from the Daleks, in that, that fact made it easier to fight them.

Sabrina looked at the Drahvins. They seemed very familiar; reminding her of various characters in the science fiction and fantasy materials she was familiar with, including some from Robert E. Howard’s Hyborian Age (Conan). She hoped the Doctor would be able to find a way to make them leave Earth without too much destruction.

Sigrun looked at the Drahvins; she didn’t like them at all. Why didn’t the Doctor notice their gaining time travel technology? How would they gain it anyway? An old abandoned TARDIS? A captured vortex manipulator? She hoped the Doctor would be able to get Earth out of this situation.

The Doctor looked at the Drahvins, he wasn’t sure how they got here, but he was sure that he would figure out a way to stop this invasion of theirs.

To be continued…

Extra disclaimer: the Drahvins belong to the BCC and the Estate of William Emms.

USS Fardell October 14 2007 06:37 AM

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Any thoughts, comments, criticisms, etc, about the first chapter?

USS Fardell January 4 2008 01:56 AM

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Disclaimer: Doctor Who and the Doctor belong to the British Broadcasting Corporation (BBC) , the Drahvins belong to the BBC and the Estate of William Emms and the Azores (technically) belong to Portugal. Anything else is mine.


Chapter 2 – Drahvins!
29 September 2018, The Azores Autonomous Region, Portugal, just outside the city of Ponta Delaga

The Doctor and his companions were still behind the trees in the park as they watched foot soldiers march out of the Drahvin starship. “What are we going to do?” Felicia asked.
“We will have to find the leader, and then I’ll have to improvise” the Doctor said. Daniel thought.
“So are we just going to march onto that ship?” he asked.
“I haven’t any other ideas, and we need to find out why the Drahvins are invading Earth at this time and place, we will have to wait until the soldiers are all out of the ship though, and hope that they won’t find us here” the Doctor said.
“Oh dear” Felicia said, thinking that there was definitely going to be discomfort ahead…

Soon the soldiers had left the ship, and the door remained open.
“Ok, now, everyone. Run!” The Doctor said.

The Doctor and his companions darted out from behind the tree, and ran towards the Drahvin starship. The starship looked the same as all other Drahvin ships he had seen, made out of a trashy tin-alloy, that could easily be punctured by weapons fire or micrometeoids.

The Doctor bounded up the debarkation ramp, followed by Felicia, Daniel, Jia’hale, and Sigrun bringing up the rear.

“Ok, we need to find the bridge, that is the place the leader is most likely to be at” the Doctor said.
“Wouldn’t that be at the top of the ship?” Sabrina asked.
“You have been watching too much Science Fiction, most often the bridge isn’t on the top, but in a more protected position within the ship” the Doctor said. Sabrina wasn’t offended by this, the Doctor had discussed with her about her preconceived ideas before.
“Wouldn’t it be worth a try though?” Sigrun asked.
“Absolutely, otherwise, we wouldn’t know” the Doctor said.
“Let’s go then” Daniel said. The Doctor lead the way along the corridor and soon found a service shaft that lead upwards, he started climbing, followed by Daniel, Felicia, Sigrun, Jai’hale and Sabrina. They soon found themselves on the top deck of the Drahvin transport.

The Doctor stepped out into the corridor, and ran a scan with the sonic screwdriver. “It is clear, and it is likely that the bridge is on this deck, lets go” he said. His companions followed him out into the corridor, and followed him towards where the sonic screwdriver was indicating the bridge was.

They soon arrived at a door, which was locked. “Deadlock seal, the sonic screwdriver is useless” the Doctor said.
“We could try a ventilation shaft” Sabrina said. The Doctor was then in thought.
“Worth a try” Daniel said.
“Ok, Sabie, Dan, we will try it” the Doctor said. They then looked along the corridor for any openings to the ship's ventilation shafts.

They soon found one, about 10 meters from the bridge door. This time the Doctor could open it with the sonic screwdriver. It clanged down onto the floor.
“Ok, I'll go first” Daniel said.
“No, Dan, I'll go first, you don't know what would be in there, it could be boobie trapped!” the Doctor said.
“Of course” Daniel said, the Doctor usually went first into dangerous situations like this.
“You can bring up the rear” the Doctor said. The Doctor then entered the ventilation duct, with Jia'hale following.
Sabrina, Felicia and Sigrun followed, and Daniel came last.

The Doctor leapt out of the ventilation shaft onto the Drahvin bridge, where many Drahvins were waiting.

“Hello Doctor!” one of them, who seemed to be in charge, said. The Doctor looked up straight, and his companions carefully exited the shaft.
'Of course, it has to be her!' the Doctor thought to himself.
“Hello, Kellira” the Doctor said, with irony in his voice. The Doctor had run into this particular Drahvin before.
“You know her?” Daniel asked.
“In a manner of speaking” the Doctor said.
Kellira made a signal and suddenly every Drahvin on the bridge were pointing their guns at the Doctor and his companions, it appeared that the Doctor was outwitted...

Kaziarl January 4 2008 09:51 AM

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I must apologize for my ignorance, but even though I have wanted to watch this show because from what I've heard it's very good, I have not had the chance to. 11th, 12th, and 13th doctor? Regeneration, did he get assimilated or something? If someone could give me some rough incite into what is going on, it would be greatly appreciated.

USS Fardell March 15 2008 11:30 AM

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Kaziarl wrote: (Post 1196776)
I must apologize for my ignorance, but even though I have wanted to watch this show because from what I've heard it's very good, I have not had the chance to. 11th, 12th, and 13th doctor? Regeneration, did he get assimilated or something? If someone could give me some rough incite into what is going on, it would be greatly appreciated.

Sorry for the confusion, but the show is still only up to the 10th Doctor.

This story is about (for the moment at least) a future version of the Doctor and his companions.

The current and past Doctors will get their turns in the story as well (eventually).


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