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atpatp March 24 2011 06:59 AM

STAR TREK: RAVENLIN: THE DIEING SHORES
 
An original Star Trek story based on and set during the events of Destiny novels.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6688339/..._DIEING_SHORES

So far seven chapters.

atpatp March 27 2011 08:03 AM

Re: STAR TREK: RAVENLIN: THE DIEING SHORES
 
No reviews? I'd really like to know how bad I suck.:p

cathouse_joe March 30 2011 03:44 AM

Re: STAR TREK: RAVENLIN: THE DIEING SHORES
 
You don't suck. You're actually a decent writer, but isn't "dieing" spelled "dying"? Instead of "acid smoke" try "acrid smoke". I've written a few stories on AdAstra and I'd love to see your's there, too.


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